2. Which qualities will you focus on in your editing? Pick at least 2.
1. Read this Handout: Qualities of A Personal Narrative That Works
2. Which qualities will you focus on in your editing? Pick at least 2.
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Gabe Period 2
10/26/2011 10:12:32 pm
Two qualities I will focus on are language and actions
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Isha K.
10/26/2011 10:14:13 pm
I will focus on background information and the ending so that it is fabulous!
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Eliza K.
10/26/2011 10:14:24 pm
I will be sure to focus on staying on topic and using better word choice. I think my work consists of boring words and I'd like to make it better. Also, I tend to drift off topic so i'll make sure that that is good too.
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<333Emily<333
10/26/2011 11:39:25 pm
i think the 2 most important qualities that i will focus on editing my story with are dialogue and the background information. I chose these two because i lacked in dialogue and i should be more specific on the 4W's and 1H.
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Sophie Brause
10/26/2011 11:39:27 pm
I want to focus on the focused purpose and the ending.
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Lizzy LeStrange per 4
10/26/2011 11:41:56 pm
I will want to focus more on Small details and more background information.
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Erin per.7
10/27/2011 02:24:41 am
I will try to small details and slow motion parts were I edit my piece.
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Sebastian Angulo
10/27/2011 02:24:55 am
I will lure the reader with my lead and I will use slowed down moments to create a movie.
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Molly
10/27/2011 02:34:19 am
I want to focus on leads and one event.
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